TLS's Old Fashioned Fanfiction Theatre - Powered by AI and imagination

[The Last Stand]

"Norma gets in her car, but briefly notices her tire is low on the driver's side. "Oh, darn!" She says. Then quickly puts on her seatbelt and sets off, driving herself to the venue.
It takes her about 20 minutes, 30 minutes tops, before she makes it there.

"I'm thinking, I'll be fine. Still drivable." Norma quirks with a smirk. Off she goes, leaving her driveway on the way to the ceremony. Car feels a little wobbly, but she still persists onward to the ceremony."

The last line of the first paragraph makes it seem that she did already arrive safely to the venue.

She's supposed to stop at a malt shop. Or maybe that's how far it is from her house.

Writers, this is why it's important to look through your shit.

Would it be better to copy/paste or use a text document to share?

 

[BBJ_4_Ever]

Text might be best, then the final version posted in the chat.

 

[The Last Stand]

Text might be best, then the final version posted in the chat.

Noted.

I cannot imagine reading big paragraphs.

 

[The Last Stand]

I will work on revising my Norma Shearer article. In the meantime, I have another idea for a crime story. That said, it'd probably be best to focus on the existing stories I currently have here to avoid confusion and to improve my writing.

 

[TurdFondler]

FYI anything posted publicly is basically unpublishable.

Also stop typing out the sounds of things, like ring ring ring.

 

[The Last Stand]

FYI anything posted publicly is basically unpublishable.

I'm not sure what you mean. You mean like with plagiarism?

 

[TurdFondler]

No like if you're writing this with publishing in mind at some point no publisher will take it if the work or even sizable excerpts are posted online.

 

[The Last Stand]

No like if you're writing this with publishing in mind at some point no publisher will take it if the work or even sizable excerpts are posted online.

Noted. I never considered publishing. If so, these are rejected drafts.

 

[The Last Stand]

FYI anything posted publicly is basically unpublishable.

Also stop typing out the sounds of things, like ring ring ring.

I don't even know if I'm good enough TO be published. Hell, AI is doing some work here.

 

[TurdFondler]

I'm not saying it's a publishable work, I'm just sayin'

 

[The Last Stand]

I'm not saying it's a publishable work, I'm just sayin'

Well, I wanted to have fun a bit and practice good writing. Especially in today's era of samey writing and cliche tropes. Any feedback is welcome. You seem like you know a thing or two about publishing.

 

[Girl Named Sandoz]

 

[The Last Stand]

I promised I'd finish my first story, and finish I will.

This time, I'll attach parts via text attachment.

Two paragraphs, in the beginning, are AI, the rest are mine.

Ver archivo adjunto 3630681

Liking old cinema means I have a fetish. Okay.

 

[The Last Stand]

Well, we're back! AND I have access to the Dall-E beta.

Joan Crawford sleeping by a tree while reading a book at a sunny park, circa 1950

 

[The Last Stand]

I wrote a story for @Robotic Richard Simmons for Secret Santa (his gift was VERY late from that.) Who's interested in reading it?

 

[The Last Stand]

I haven't forgotten about my stories. On vacation.

Would anybody want a story relating to this shutdown?

 

[Girl Named Sandoz]

I haven't forgotten about my stories. On vacation.

Would anybody want a story relating to this shutdown?

only if it has at least 3 granny cameos

 

[The Last Stand]

only if it has at least 3 granny cameos

If the site stays up, you got it!

 

[The Last Stand]

I haven't forgotten about my stories. On vacation.

Would anybody want a story relating to this shutdown?

only if it has at least 3 granny cameos

Here's a, how you say, "setting the stage," of my shutdown story. Wikipedia style, I suppose. I decided to make it about a club.

 

[The Last Stand]

Can somebody make me a logo for The Elsie Club?