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The Last Stand

Lady Bougainvillea
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With the power of AI generation and human input with lots of time on my hand, I'd like to share creative musings and novel writings I've created.

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I feel I can write, but not well enough to create fictional stories or scenarios. Constructive feedback would be welcome.



Heaven Doves

CHAPTER 1

"Cut! Print! That's a wrap, we'll try again tomorrow. Beautiful performance, Joan Crawford!"

The producer calls out to her as she makes her way to the changing room. Joan smiles at him and gives him her usual nod, before walking into the women's dressing room with an eye roll. She's still tired from last night and wants nothing more than to go home and get some sleep, but instead, here she is, trying to keep herself awake so she can make it back to her hotel room by tonight. She sighs and looks over at the director who's giving her a knowing look, which makes her frown slightly. "You know this part isn't really for you. Just for fun." He says as he turns to leave. "And what's wrong with that? I'm perfectly capable of working my ass off for hours on end just to make it through one day, if that's what it takes." she retorts without thinking.

Her words echo around the now empty room and suddenly, someone else walks through the door, their head snapping up quickly at the sound. Joan looks away and tries not to feel embarrassed for being caught yelling at the director like this; she was simply stating facts. The girl doesn't seem to think it's worth saying anything else though because after a moment, she nods silently at her and heads to another dressing room, leaving Joan wondering where the hell that came from. It wasn't until she hears her say something to the director that Joan realizes that they probably heard the whole thing. She doesn't even want to imagine how everyone else will react to seeing her like this, especially when she knows that they're all expecting her to take the role next year.

After another few minutes, she's alone again and Joan leans against the wall, taking off her makeup and grabbing her things before making her way outside towards her car. There are already a number of people waiting around for their rides and Joan thinks she spots someone familiar in the crowd. As soon as she sees him, it feels like she's being watched. She stares back in that general direction for a few seconds before entering She's still staring out the window when she pulls onto the road that leads to her hotel. She doesn't know what has come over her today, but her instinct tells her she's being followed. Maybe she's paranoid or maybe she's just tired, but Joan feels safe having no idea who's following her. She doesn't care. When she pulls up outside her hotel room, she parks her car right by the curb before turning off her engine and getting out, shutting her car door quietly behind her.

When she starts walking towards the building, she stops and waits as a group of girls pass her on their way inside and she watches them from a distance.

"Women. What ever happened to glamour back in the day?" Crawford whispered to herself. As the girls start laughing and talking loudly, Joan rolls her eyes and shakes her head, continuing her walk past the group to get inside. Before she gets too far, she hears one of the girls call out to her. Joan hurries into the lobby into the elevator. Script in one hand, purse in another, Joan couldn't wait to get into her hotel room for wine and a nice bed. She presses the button for the seventh floor and the elevator ride goes on slow. When it finally stops on the tenth floor, Joan immediately steps out and heads down the hallway, passing several rooms, until she reaches hers. She unlocks the door and slips her shoes off and sets her purse down on the table near the door.

As Joan takes a deep breath, she removes her dress shirt and tosses both pieces of clothing on the chair. Next to her is a vintage wine bottle and a glass . After pouring herself a glass of red, Joan picks it up and begins sipping it slowly while she lets her thoughts wander. It's been a crazy week, with almost all of her scenes filmed. She'd finished filming her last scene yesterday, and then spent the afternoon trying to do another two and change scenes for the film. It's been a long day, and now that she's back home, Joan wants nothing more than to relax, drink wine and have a hot shower.

A few hours later, there was finally a break. A short lunch break, and then filming began again. By now, Joan's exhausted, and although she wants to be productive, she wants to crawl under her blanket and fall asleep for the rest of the evening. She hasn't had much sleep lately, and with everything going on, she had NO patience for any shenanigans.

Joan sets down her wineglass and places her hands in front of her face, leaning forward. For the last two months, she has been doing this exact same routine, but each night, she feels like something is different about this time. Like someone else is following her, and although she does everything exactly the same, she knows that something has changed. And tonight felt...off somehow.

Maybe, her mind whispers to her, it's because today is your big premiere and the only thing on your mind was work. But then again, she also thinks she remembers reading once that the only reason someone feels like they' re being followed is because they don't want anyone else to find out about this, or maybe because they need to keep a secret. But no matter what the answer might be, Joan decides that whatever is happening right now is definitely a coincidence. She shouldn't be feeling this unsettled, because she should be feeling happy. Time for bed. Ready for tomorrow.

"I hope nobody gives me a hard time tomorrow."
 
That may be so, I was not sure if you were going for set etiquette of the time.

eta: I can't wait to find out who's following her. Is it a Prague munitions company owner?
 
Última edición:
Would you mind indicating which parts are what you wrote and which parts the AI did with different colors, or even just making the text bold? The reason I ask is because from my own experience, the AI tends to have trouble with the fine details of a scene.
I'll keep that in mind in the future. I don't think it does that automatically. I'll have to test that out.

Edit: AI text will be bolded.
 
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Chapter 2

Ring, ring, ring, her alarm clock rang. Six in the morning, slightly hungover from last night, Joan was hesitant to get up. But she always woke up early, especially when she was in a shoot, and this was definitely no exception. She had to get to work.

With a heavy sigh, she swung her legs over the side of the bed and sat up, swinging her feet around. Once she stood, she massaged her legs for a quick stretch. It didn't feel right waking up this early, but Joan knew that it was necessary to get ready and finish filming for the day. As she got dressed in comfortable yet sexy lingerie, she thought about the events of the previous day. She thought about what had happened. Not because she was jealous, or angry, or upset, no. She never was, anyway. This was all just an unfortunate twist of fate, that meant nothing to her. Nothing at all. Still, when Joan stepped onto set in LA, it seemed that every single person who looked at her stopped what they were doing and stared at her. Joan kept a blank expression on her face, hoping she could ignore the stares for a bit longer, but unfortunately, it seems that her luck had run out.

Everyone who made eye contact with her would turn quickly and focus their attention back to their own work. Joan frowned; something was clearly off with her castmates. Maybe they didn't like her. Yeah...probably. They probably didn't even remember why they liked her in the first place, anyway.

With a shake of her head, Joan continued on with her day and pretended that nothing unusual was going on. In a way, she was thankful that the other actors acted as if nothing weird was occurring. She had enough on her plate without adding this extra stress into her life, anyway. By midday, the show was nearing its climax, and Joan found that she couldn't help the nervousness rising within her. It had been a busy couple of days, and the production team seemed to notice that something wasn't quite right with Joan.
 
Assuming it's serious, the only thing I can say is some parts seem to read a bit oddly. Take for for instance:

"hoping she could ignore the stares for a bit longer, but unfortunately, it seems that her luck had run out". Luck in what, ignoring stares? Phrasing there is off imo and I'm not surprised it was by AI.

I'd have replaced it with something more organic sounding or specific to the situation, like "she was unable to maintain her Poker face any longer", or something.

I don't write because I'm sure it'd be awful, so take my input with a grain of salt.
 
Assuming it's serious, the only thing I can say is some parts seem to read a bit oddly. Take for for instance:

"hoping she could ignore the stares for a bit longer, but unfortunately, it seems that her luck had run out". Luck in what, ignoring stares? Phrasing there is off imo and I'm not surprised it was by AI.
AI did that. I'll have to run through the draft again.
 
Chapter 2 into 3 is being made while I think of concepts.

In the meantime, here's my attempt at journalism. This is a very rough draft I want to clean up, so anybody with a keen eye of journalist writing (looking at you @DawnDusk,) let me know.



Norma Shearer, best known for films such as The Divorced and Roman Delight, makes a ceremonious, late arrival to the awards show. Reason? Her tire was flat.

It's not like Norma to be late for anything, she's always bright and early on everything. But her tire just had to be flat, that day of accepting her award.

Her day started like any other: up at 6am, out the shower at 7, stretch, then her favorite breakfast: orange juice with a side of oatmeal and blueberries. It wasn't until around 9am that things really began going downhill.

Her 1940 Ford was just detailed, ready to head out for the ceremony. Tires shined, exterior waxed, interior scented. Just enough to make a glamorous appearance.

"I spared no expense." Norma laughed. "All dressed up, wearing white. I even wore pants."

The first part was true: Norma was never short of pants when it came to appearances. They were practically a sign of rebellion during the times.

Norma gets in her car, but briefly notices her tire is low on the driver's side. "Oh, darn!" She says. Then quickly puts on her seatbelt and sets off, driving herself to the venue.
It takes her about 20 minutes, 30 minutes tops, before she makes it there.

"I'm thinking, I'll be fine. Still drivable." Norma quirks with a smirk. Off she goes, leaving her driveway on the way to the ceremony. Car feels a little wobbly, but she still persists onward to the ceremony.

Midway through the ride, she stops for a malt at the drugstore then she realizes the front tire looks pretty flat. And it looks very wet and dirty too.
Now how did this happen!?
"What could be the cause?" Norma ponders aloud to herself. She turns to inspect the tire in the front window; it's flat.


"That's what I actually said!" Norma laughed. "Tire just pops while I pick up a malt. I'm worried because I don't know how to change a tire. And I was running late."


Norma was almost sure that she would be fine, though there was no harm in checking. So that was why she took her car into the shop to take a look at the tire.
After spending some time inspecting the tire, she finally got an idea of what could've happened to cause it to pop.
"Oh, that explains why it's so wet," Norma says.


She ran to a payphone for help. Immediately, several people noticed the Norma Shearer dressed for the ceremony. She appreciates the attention; she was just worried about the time.

"I love my fans. But not one of them could help with my tire. Still, it feels nice to be appreciated. I was signing autographs, shaking hands, even kissed a baby. While my Ford is just sitting there with a flat!"

The tow truck finally came after about 20 minutes. Shearer was relieved, but needed a ride to the ceremony, stat. She asked the tow truck driver to escort her to the ceremony.

Little did the crowd expect for a glamorous actress like Norma Shearer to arrive via tow truck. Once there, she rapidly exits to enter the ceremony. Her name is announced as soon as she bolts through the main doors.

"...of Best Performance goes to Norma Shearer for Roman Delight!" As rushed as Shearer appeared, her glamour was not unfazed.

"Funny story, my car is still hooked up to the truck as I do this interview!"


AI is not good at distinguishing period scenes. It would always generate Uber, Lyft, tablet, cell phone, etc.
 
Here's the remaining of Chapter 2. All by a few lines are AI written (those are bolded). I'm liking this approach so far with introducing another character.


"ACTION!" This scene involved Joan Crawford, roleplaying as an up and coming stenographer named Betty. Betty is an intern who works as a stenographer at one of Hollywood's premier publishing houses looking to advance her career. While Joan loved the character, the script didn't suit her well.

"What kind of scene is that?" Joan asked as she walked off set, looking over to her producer. The producer sighed, "We' re shooting it for the umpteenth time and we haven't gotten anywhere." Joan nodded her understanding.

The production crew always worked on these scenes for weeks beforehand, and even though they did everything they could to keep the actors on track and on script, they always struggled to bring the best parts to life during the actual filming process. As she makes her way down the set, she can't help but feel the uneasy feeling growing stronger inside her chest. All of this isn't normal. Something is wrong. Even if she tried to push it aside, Joan couldn't stop thinking about it. Something really was off, and she couldn't understand what it was. It' s not like she was acting differently. It wasn't anything dramatic, so why did it make her so uneasy?

Joan walks over to her dressing area, opening one of the drawers that was beside the mirror and grabbing a pair of sunglasses. She puts them on and proceeds towards the door, ready for the next scene.

As soon as she exits her dressing room, she recognizes the same man from the other night. Just staring at him for awhile, Joan notices a small flash of panic rise in his eyes when he saw her. His eyes widen as she looks away, making her think for a brief moment that maybe he's been stalking her and it isn't just a coincidence after all. She shrugs it off and continues on her way.

She passes the man and nods hello. He returns the gesture, but he quickly turns his head away, obviously uncomfortable with their interaction, and Joan thinks nothing of it, even though she knows he was the one following her for some unknown reason. "Is he part of the crew?" Joan thought. She didn't recognize him at all. Was she mistaken? Maybe her mind was playing tricks on her. Joan shook her head, dismissing the idea from her mind. She doesn't remember seeing his name on the list of extras either, but that doesn't mean that he doesn't exist. She'll ask the crew if he was on their crew sometime later, when she had more time.

Right now, her priority is to get through the next five minutes of shooting. After finishing the last scene of the day, Joan walks backstage with Jack. They're waiting to see how the scenes from the other four scenes have gone before they begin recording. They sit in the middle of the theater, which is now deserted except for themselves. No one else is there, and for some inexplicable reason it makes Joan feel a little uncomfortable.

She clears her throat before speaking, "Did you guys manage to wrap everything up? Is everyone ready for tomorrow?" She asks.

"Yes," Jack says. "Everything is fine. I'm sure it will go smoothly tomorrow. I think we've done a good job." Joan smiles, appreciating Jack's optimism. She knows that she needs to be positive in her work. If she keeps her negative feelings to herself, then she can deal with them, but if she allows them to surface, it's going to become harder to get them down.

"Hey, Jack. I wanted to ask. Have the director hired more crew?" Jack looked confused when she asked. "No, I don't believe so. Everybody seems to be doing just fine." "Well, that's good then, right?" Jack smiles, and then suddenly frowns. He shakes his head. "Wait..." "What?"

Joan asks, wondering what was wrong.

"I remember hearing somebody about you being spooked the other night." Joan gulps nervously. This is getting stranger by the second, and Joan isn't sure what to do anymore. "Spooked? By...what, exactly?"

She questions. Jack looks around suspiciously, as if to make sure no one was listening.

"Don't tell anybody, okay?" Joan nods. "Okay. Well…there was someone just outside, staring at me in a crowd. Who was he?" Joan's heart begins racing. Was it someone from the studio? Someone from their department?

Or was it...some sort of creep that came to stalk her on set? It was hard to say. All she knew was that it was unnerving. "I don't know...who it was, Jack," she replied, shrugging. Before she could finish, both of them were called on set for the next scene.

 
"Norma gets in her car, but briefly notices her tire is low on the driver's side. "Oh, darn!" She says. Then quickly puts on her seatbelt and sets off, driving herself to the venue.
It takes her about 20 minutes, 30 minutes tops, before she makes it there.

"I'm thinking, I'll be fine. Still drivable." Norma quirks with a smirk. Off she goes, leaving her driveway on the way to the ceremony. Car feels a little wobbly, but she still persists onward to the ceremony."

The last line of the first paragraph makes it seem that she did already arrive safely to the venue.
 
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