💬 Off-Topic Hooves & Friends (Update 10/7/2015 PAGE 1)

Make a comic of him getting a tattoo and a block of cheese then begging for a north face coat then accusing someone of being entitled.

I read that as "getting a tattoo of a block of cheese".....which is something i can honestly see phil doing.
It would possibly be one of the least stupid things hes done to himself.
 
Only if the cheese is accompanied by a jacket spud.
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This might take a while to kickoff, but for a while now I've been mulling over the idea. I've been wanting to practice drawing more cartoonishly styled people for a while now, and I find ADF and the people around him to be very "colorful". Inspired by the likes of @Trickie and @_blank_ , I'll be attempting to doodle up "Hooves & Friends"

It'll chronicle the adventures of an opressed , trans latinx, POC ("Hooves"). Character design is still in very early phases (I'm still trying to figure out proportions and style)but this is a rough colored doodle of what I'm envisioning the character to look like.

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Of course, Hooves isn't alone in the world. She has friends and enemies. Here is a rough sketch of some of them. They don't have any official names yet...
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1-) True and Honest POC: Nuff' said.

2-) Priviledged Scum: A total priviledged shitlord. Evil personified. He has the audacity to use public transportation. Other crimes include: Being white, male and employed. Hooves mortal enemy.

3-) Hooves' friends: : ) Super great pals that would never do anything bad to Hooves. Ever.

Things are still in development, but I figured that posting this might push me to work on it more. This is purely for fun. I don't know if my writing capabilities will be up to it, but we'll see! If anyone has any ideas or things they'd like to see, I'm always open to suggestions.

All of my THIS. So amazing. I would read the shit out of this comic. Anything that could help make it let us know, I'm pretty sure everyone would pitch in.
 
This might take a while to kickoff, but for a while now I've been mulling over the idea. I've been wanting to practice drawing more cartoonishly styled people for a while now, and I find ADF and the people around him to be very "colorful". Inspired by the likes of @Trickie and @_blank_ , I'll be attempting to doodle up "Hooves & Friends"

It'll chronicle the adventures of an opressed , trans latinx, POC ("Hooves"). Character design is still in very early phases (I'm still trying to figure out proportions and style)but this is a rough colored doodle of what I'm envisioning the character to look like.

Ver archivo adjunto 49752

Of course, Hooves isn't alone in the world. She has friends and enemies. Here is a rough sketch of some of them. They don't have any official names yet...
Ver archivo adjunto 49753

1-) True and Honest POC: Nuff' said.

2-) Priviledged Scum: A total priviledged shitlord. Evil personified. He has the audacity to use public transportation. Other crimes include: Being white, male and employed. Hooves mortal enemy.

3-) Hooves' friends: : ) Super great pals that would never do anything bad to Hooves. Ever.

Things are still in development, but I figured that posting this might push me to work on it more. This is purely for fun. I don't know if my writing capabilities will be up to it, but we'll see! If anyone has any ideas or things they'd like to see, I'm always open to suggestions.

Could i request your artistic impression of violet "goblin queen" moonstar. She my fav of ADFs lolcalfs.
 
This might take a while to kickoff, but for a while now I've been mulling over the idea. I've been wanting to practice drawing more cartoonishly styled people for a while now, and I find ADF and the people around him to be very "colorful". Inspired by the likes of @Trickie and @_blank_ , I'll be attempting to doodle up "Hooves & Friends"

It'll chronicle the adventures of an opressed , trans latinx, POC ("Hooves"). Character design is still in very early phases (I'm still trying to figure out proportions and style)but this is a rough colored doodle of what I'm envisioning the character to look like.

Ver archivo adjunto 49752

Of course, Hooves isn't alone in the world. She has friends and enemies. Here is a rough sketch of some of them. They don't have any official names yet...
Ver archivo adjunto 49753

1-) True and Honest POC: Nuff' said.

2-) Priviledged Scum: A total priviledged shitlord. Evil personified. He has the audacity to use public transportation. Other crimes include: Being white, male and employed. Hooves mortal enemy.

3-) Hooves' friends: : ) Super great pals that would never do anything bad to Hooves. Ever.

Things are still in development, but I figured that posting this might push me to work on it more. This is purely for fun. I don't know if my writing capabilities will be up to it, but we'll see! If anyone has any ideas or things they'd like to see, I'm always open to suggestions.
All my yes!

And make Priviledged Scum a techie. Preferably one with a good social conscience like supporting the LGBT or something but no matter what he does, Hooves still calls him a Cis Shitlord or whatever perjorative term Potatoboy uses.
 
His various boogiemen, like Gamergate and Ashkenazi Jews, needs to make appearances also. Perhaps as manifestations of his manic delusions, visible only to him? You could perhaps treat Phil as an ultra-modern Don Quixote with Tweaker Cat as his unwilling Sancho Panza?
 
Aw, thanks so much for the feedback guys., I really appreciate it. Now, I've been working on the first mini-story, it's going to me more of a "test run" than anything else. I don't normally post works in progress, but I think I'll start doing that for this. If I waited until I had something finished, updates might take too long. So, here's a peak at panel 1 during the inking stage:

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Our hero, fighting the good fight at his local park. At @Hellblazer 's suggestion, I took Hooves teeth from 3 to 2. I think it works better. Hopefully the nest update will be a colored page. (It's gonna take a while)

It could be fun to make his tattoos a random mismash of garbage that changes from panel to panel. It'd save you headaches with remembering what goes where as well.

I want to do a little story to show how he started getting the tatts...But yes. This was an idea I was dabbling with, and I think its the way to go.

I think a lot of the dialogue should be verbatim from their updates. Like if you're doing a short form comic strip version, I'd do the post with their replies verbatim

Definitely. I'll probably use a combination of writen dialogue and verbatim. I'll have to comb through facebook posts for replies and dialogue bits (UGH). I don't think I'll be able to produce content fast enough to keep up with all the highspeed drama... But I'll try to write situations that reflect what has happened.

I'd ask to be a character but I'm realizing I don't have any pictures or anything I've given the farms, lol.
We could go incredibly literal and make you an anthropomorphic cat smoking a crack pipe.

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"Meow meow meow?" Theaker, I wasn't planning on inserting you as a character (unless you wanted) because I saw you more as a victim of Ahuviya more than anything. However... I do really like ide idea of Tweak the Cat.

Could i request your artistic impression of violet "goblin queen" moonstar. She my fav of ADFs lolcalfs.

Ah, this.... I'm not that well versed on a lot of the ADF Lolcalf (Thanks @Smutley for organizing all this info), but here goes...
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Somebody has just found out that Hooves isn't hispanic and is in fact, white. If I use this character, it'll probably be named something like Vivian Moonstar. Same for all the others, and I;m very glad that people manage to make out the characters based on Jordman and Rika. I want characters to look similar, but not be too identical. Thank you again for all the suggestions, it has given me a lot to mull over.

Finally:
@Batman VS Tony Danza said "Draw me like one of your french girls".

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Ok.
 
Ho-okay! I'll be traveling for a bit due to work related reasons, and that slow down the completion of the first page. However, page one is fully inked and is in the coloring stage. Here's a work in progress of a colored/shaded Hooves.
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No more teasing! The next update should be a proper page!
 
I was thinking what about adding his stylish beret from his Maoist days, but having it undergoing a slow trans(ha)formation into a fashionable lady's accessory? Like, the Red Star gets covered by a crappy appliquéd flower, some Dias de Los Muertos icons, some bicycle crap. Also, having a little trail of transit commuter cards falling out of his pockets from time to time would be hilarious, almost like they're escaping.
 
Suggestions are good and all, but please give Venusaur some room to breathe and tell his story the way he wants. dis gon b gud
 
This is great, but without the enormous flat expanse between the eyes, cartoon ADF kinda looks like a person :(
 
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