Just played the chapter partially, the dialogue of the Lightners was miserable to read, is there ANYTHING that even remotely dampens the faggot relationship? I don't care about spoilers regarding that, I'd rather just find out to stop holding out hope if that's useless. The Holiday House had nothing on this god-awful festival.
As for the positive things: The platformer segments were well-done, liked the art even if I'm unsure on why it's Japanese, some jokes actually made me laugh for a few seconds, and the flowers are cool due to being unrelated to the insanely forced dyke shit, not to mention that I had a nice time seeing the parallels and differences with the Undertale souls.
Didn't feel as fleshed out as it could have been, mechanics weren't really repeated in a satisfying way, but everything except the dialogue has been fine so far. Narrative and said dialogue have jumped off of a bridge and -ACKed, however.