Tiberius Rising Tiberius Rising Chapter 17

[DeagleDad420]

http://www.booksie.com/war_and_military/novel/parkourdude91/tiberius-rising/chapter/17

Jace just posted this on twitter. Haven't read the whole thing yet, will update the OP with thoughts when I do. This is an unusually long one (again)

 

[FlyAwayNow]

GOD DAMMIT

 

[KingofManga420]

Damn Jace got productive.

 

[MurcDusen]

Just a few seconds after I made that post in the chapter 16 thread... it seems much more appropriate here now.

Damn Jace got productive.

He had some inspirational dreams.

 

[XYZpdq]

Damn Jace got productive.

Gotta disassociate somehow.

 

[KingofManga420]

Gotta disassociate somehow.

Like a hardened killing machine needs to disassociate, right?

 

[Superior Watermelon]

GOD DAMMIT

ITS FUBAR!

 

[MurcDusen]

Okay, so I think he at least finally settled on one spelling for Ramirez.

Also, apparently Stryker is always wearing an eyepatch ruining his vision, just so that he has a backup eye in case one gets blinded by something, just like the pirates of ye olde did. Furthermore, a new utterly misused term enters the fray: double-tap. I'm not even sure what exactly he think it means.

 

[Shrekolas Cage]

So, should I keep making my own version of Tiberius Rising, with the gay love stories and all that?

 

[Arctic]

Did Stryker just admit he made a mistake? Holy shit.

 

[Organic Fapcup]

So, should I keep making my own version of Tiberius Rising, with the gay love stories and all that?

Sure, do it.

 

[Varis]

Damn Jace got productive.

He must have stopped taking his meds again.

 

[Andrew Noel Schaefer]

Okay, so I think he at least finally settled on one spelling for Ramirez.

Also, apparently Stryker is always wearing an eyepatch ruining his vision, just so that he has a backup eye in case one gets blinded by something, just like the pirates of ye olde did. Furthermore, a new utterly misused term enters the fray: double-tap. I'm not even sure what exactly he think it means.

I imagine its like fanning, only with modern firearms and thus impossible.

 

[RP 520]

Did Stryker just admit he made a mistake? Holy shit.

It will probably be ret-conned in the next chapter, revealing that he was rusing or something and was right the entire time.

 

[WachtAmWeb]

So, Jace completely made up some shit about eye-patches just so his Mary Sue could be a bit more like Solid Snake; he made his Arabic terrorists speak Farsi; he mentions "parachuting" out of nowhere; he completely misuses the phrase "double tap"; he manufactures Ramirez's "Juggernaut armour" into being an Iron Man suit complete with bulletproof full-face visor, AND he still thinks hashish is the same as opium.
On the plus side though, Jace used the "but none of that mattered now" cliche again!! Yaaayyy!

 

[GREEDY FIREMAN]

GOD DAMMIT

Hey, he's keeping you in business!

 

[butt in trouble]

In the first paragraph Jace's spergy mind gets lost in the fantasy of having his own weed farm.

 

[Shrekolas Cage]

Here is the REAL Tiberius Rising Chapter 17. http://www.booksie.com/war_and_military/novel/shrekolas_cage/tiberius-rising-2/chapter/2
Now at least 50% gayer than before.

I didn't even try this time...

 

[Flowers For Sonichu]

Damn Jace got a new adderall hookup.

fix'd

 

[GREEDY FIREMAN]

Here we go: http://www.booksie.com/war_and_military/novel/shrekolas_cage/tiberius-rising-2/chapter/2
Now at least 50% gayer than before.

I didn't even try this time...

I was just about to go to bed, but now I'm to scared, thinking about what Stryker might do to me!