TheMysteriousMrEnter

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Still sperging about that episode.
 
Oh magnificent tyrant
In an imaginary land
Above the realities
Of the common man

Cheap tactics are the foundation
For your castle of wealth
With no means of entry
Except for yourself

For a dragon that rests
Atop a mountain of green
Who scorches the brave
That dare make a scene

With a dictator's plan
That's riddled with holes
And a unforeseen power
Spiraled out of control

Destroying any being
That tries to oppose
Yet only ends up with
A thousand more foes

A titan that's crippled
With an Achilles' heel
Critics burn through its iron
Remarks cut through its steel

And the kingdom built on paper
In the wake of its fall
Leaves little of substance
If any at all

Yet even in the ashes
True art can be unveiled
And the peasants can succeed
Where the tyrant had failed
 
Swiggity Swooty dijo:
Oh magnificent tyrant
In an imaginary land
Above the realities
Of the common man

Cheap tactics are the foundation
For your castle of wealth
With no means of entry
Except for yourself

For a dragon that rests
Atop a mountain of green
Who scorches the brave
That dare make a scene

With a dictator's plan
That's riddled with holes
And a unforeseen power
Spiraled out of control

Destroying any being
That tries to oppose
Yet only ends up with
A thousand more foes

A titan that's crippled
With an Achilles' heel
Critics burn through its iron
Remarks cut through its steel

And the kingdom built on paper
In the wake of its fall
Leaves little of substance
If any at all

Yet even in the ashes
True art can be unveiled
And the peasants can succeed
Where the tyrant had failed
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Oh jesus, where to begin with this one?

>Horrible base
>Completely incorrect base
>Lame wording
>Attempting to rhyme oppose with foes and holes with control
>Not spicing up the rhyme scheme at all
>Not attempting any sort of poetic devices
>Nothing at all special about this fucking poem
 
Swiggity Swooty dijo:
Oh magnificent tyrant
In an imaginary land
Above the realities
Of the common man

Cheap tactics are the foundation
For your castle of wealth
With no means of entry
Except for yourself

For a dragon that rests
Atop a mountain of green
Who scorches the brave
That dare make a scene

With a dictator's plan
That's riddled with holes
And a unforeseen power
Spiraled out of control

Destroying any being
That tries to oppose
Yet only ends up with
A thousand more foes

A titan that's crippled
With an Achilles' heel
Critics burn through its iron
Remarks cut through its steel

And the kingdom built on paper
In the wake of its fall
Leaves little of substance
If any at all

Yet even in the ashes
True art can be unveiled
And the peasants can succeed
Where the tyrant had failed
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Why. This is... why.
 
Swiggity Swooty dijo:
My Little Enter Can't Be This Cute
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OTP for life.

Piga Dgrifm dijo:
Here's a thing he wrote about that old guy that keeps showing up in his videos:

http://mrenter.deviantart.com/art/Mr-Enter-and-the-Old-Man-456411046

His fans think it's ~super deep.
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So, that's pretty much just Enter having a conversation with his imaginary friend about.... I don't even know. What was the point of that post again ?
 
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