how can i learn proper grammer

Dude, your grammar is fine. 80% of what you want to fix would be fixed just by using sentences. Drop the odd rock of a period or comma into your stream of subconsciousness posts to let people walk along with you instead of getting washed out to sea.
Saddam's latent aggression and homosexual tendencies are laid bare in his style of writing.
 
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