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I’m drawing casa de moon. Also IMG_0691.jpeg
I got my stickers. You don’t have no stickers yeah how does that make you feel bich?!
 
shooting ideas around
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i wanted toput his right leg chocking the neck but im debating on just hiding it behind since its just doesnt work as well as i hoped to
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in the end i just did the remake of the old idea
however it wasnt the idea at first
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I think you made right choice it fits scene better.
although im wondering what's preventing those other heads from attacking? I can see two are retarded like me and tangled themselves, but why wouldn't others just attack while your knight is fixated on the one, this has nothing to do with feedback or anything just seem odd to me that they wouldn't take advantage of this prefect opportunity
 
I think you made right choice it fits scene better.
although im wondering what's preventing those other heads from attacking? I can see two are retarded like me and tangled themselves, but why wouldn't others just attack while your knight is fixated on the one, this has nothing to do with feedback or anything just seem odd to me that they wouldn't take advantage of this prefect opportunity
The idea was that he already choked the 2 heads and then tied them in the knot and 2 others are scared and or having second thoughts on the idea
i might change it cause i wanted to space them out a bit anyway
 
The idea was that he already choked the 2 heads and then tied them in the knot and 2 others are scared and or having second thoughts on the idea
i might change it cause i wanted to space them out a bit anyway
That wouldn't be bad idea, I think the ones in center are bit to congested, but that might just be me, I am thinking since you already have one on the right already off page a bit, you could probably do that with the left one too, give some room to center ones to breath a bit maybe? But I think that might kill appeal of that empty space where hydra? looking. But im betting you already have a plan in mind to what you wanna do, those are just my thoughts looking at it, I however realized I need to build my line confidence because you have some good line work that easy to read at a glance, and I need that haha.
 
im continuing the promo job for the race
but i decided to show some initiative
not all the participants will have photos ready so people behind the race decided to just use the stock photo of the racer man
however i want to get them use this
i just use the fill tool for the most of it so it needs a lot of work to fill the gaps
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not sure i will make this in time though
the race is this saturday
maybe if add the patch with sponsor of the race it will more likely fly through
I however realized I need to build my line confidence because you have some good line work that easy to read at a glance, and I need that haha.
it just practice and muscle memory dude
also helping though that i used to exclusevely draw in ink on paper and doing a lot of technical drawing for the work
 
cleanup a bit. need to find my pens now
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small question:

I always have the impulse to include a speech bubble or caption. kinda want to include a speech bubble for her saying "Sink me!" which is the flavor text for the gun ingame. but i feel like my shit is almost always either cringe or unnecessary. but then i want something to be in that empty space next to her head. idk
 
small question:

I always have the impulse to include a speech bubble or caption. kinda want to include a speech bubble for her saying "Sink me!" which is the flavor text for the gun ingame. but i feel like my shit is almost always either cringe or unnecessary. but then i want something to be in that empty space next to her head. idk
do you want for her saying that?
if thats the falvor text for a gun i feel like it would make sence to write it on the gun
its not that im against the idea but the phrase doen't make sense to me
but than again im esl retard and i havent played boarderlands in ages
 
if thats the falvor text for a gun i feel like it would make sence to write it on the gun
might give that a go, seems sensible. maybe try a graffiti type of thing on the stock in red ink or something

the gun is called the Pimpernel, and the whole thing is an ingame reference to an old movie called The Scarlet Pimpernel that I happened to watch a lot as a kid
 
Some more progress, I think I might be using brush bit to much becoming muddy a bit, especially with knight in back seat, I might change background and get rid of police car, I am unsure it it'll become to much that eye wouldn't be able to quickly see what going on in first few seconds. But my line work getting shaky, so im calling it a day.
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trying to segment the hydra head to make sence of scales
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i was using this pic as a reference but still not sure of resault
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I think it would be funnier if instead of a cigarette he was drawing something rude on the hydra with a permanent marker
maybe
sounds funny
 
cleanup a bit. need to find my pens now
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got them inks
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been doing this thing lately, putting a much thicker line around the figure. magically makes it look less shitty. stole that from frank cho, one of my favorite artists. think he stole it from someone else. it's nice and low effort, I like it. gonna practice some watercolor before ruining this, but at least I have a pic of it in a pre-colored state now. might still draw a claptrap in the space behind her. and the car looks jank but im over it lmao
 
got them inks
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been doing this thing lately, putting a much thicker line around the figure. magically makes it look less shitty. stole that from frank cho, one of my favorite artists. think he stole it from someone else. it's nice and low effort, I like it. gonna practice some watercolor before ruining this, but at least I have a pic of it in a pre-colored state now. might still draw a claptrap in the space behind her. and the car looks jank but im over it lmao
i was using the thick outline for a while now
its a good way to show dimensions
you start with the things that a close and then move on to things behind it
for example here i will do first bottom edge of the rings on the helmet
then helmet itself
then medals on the cape
then cape itself and so on
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also question do you have reference for the gun?
hand itself looks great but the part with the thumb confuses me a bit
is there a hole in the body of the gun for the thumb?
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i was using the thick outline for a while now
its a good way to show dimensions
you start with the things that a close and then move on to things behind it
for example here i will do first bottom edge of the rings on the helmet
then helmet itself
then medals on the cape
then cape itself and so on
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also question do you have reference for the gun?
hand itself looks great but the part with the thumb confuses me a bit
is there a hole in the body of the gun for the thumb?
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yeah it's scuffed but there is a thumb hole there.
 
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