Art WIP, Advice & Critique Thread - spammy sister of art thread

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Working on a 40k comic. Will ink tomorrow.
 
if you have any idea on how to villify him a bit more im ready to listen
idk how well to apply it here since his face is obscured, but take a book out of old fairy tales. evil destroys people from the inside. they are ugly, gross, disfigured. witches with big noses covered in warts. etc. we naturally associate beauty with good and ugliness with evil. so yeah he's too conventionally attractive.

Greedy capitalist corpo people are often portrayed as pigs in political cartoons. it's an embodiment of greed. but notice they're not fit athletic men with pig heads. they're FAT!!! fat is ugly, fat is greedy, fat is bad. so long story short, my suggestion is to make him fat and maybe give him pig features.

I can't read this but it's a good illustration of what I mean. and I don't need to read it to recognize the porky features and know this is very much anti-capitalist propaganda.
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kinda finished with the corpoman but as people rightfully pointed out he looks way too appealing
hopefully the spartan will look more heroic in comparison but if you have any idea on how to villify him a bit more im ready to listen
Greedy capitalist corpo people are often portrayed as pigs in political cartoons. it's an embodiment of greed. but notice they're not fit athletic men with pig heads. they're FAT!!! fat is ugly, fat is greedy, fat is bad. so long story short, my suggestion is to make him fat and maybe give him pig features.
I disagree on the making him look fat, the 'fat capitalist' looks kind of quaint and pleasant by modern standards. Like it would actually be kind of funny if the Ubisofts of the world were run by guys who looked like Hoggish Greedly who were taking away game ownership rights in order to buy more champagne and foie gras but that's way too human. The rage inducing thing about modern corpo is that it's just a machine that answers to committee thinking, no human face at all.

My advice would just be to take away the hair and glasses and make him look like a mannequin. You could give him a less masculine body shape/pose but I'm not sure how that would work in your art-style. You could also consider copying him and putting some smaller identical corpomen to the left and right, if it wouldn't change the composition too much.
 
making him fat means i have to redoo a lot of ground
i will finish spartan first and see what needs to be done with corpo guy
i like the idea with the mannequin
right now im still torn on the colors
maybe silver\platinum armor will send paladin vibes better
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yeah ok i like this
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