Sonichu [Fan Comic] Rosechu's Story - A reimagining of the Sonichu story from Rosechu's perspective.

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So by this, Chris is fact ripped off Rosechu and Sonichu's saying on the cover of Issue 0. Can't say I'm terribly surprised.

 

[Trickie]

I like your style, very much. A little criticism from an art fag is that I kinda had trouble figuring out where the "camera" was stationed for the middle panels. It looks like you go from in front of them on the first 3 panels, then go behind them on the fourth. From the fifth onward I couldn't really tell where the camera was until I noticed that we were looking in front of sonichu in the fifth. So I think you went from the characters front side in the first 3 panels, to their backside the 4th panel, and then back to their front on the fifth, yeah? A little hard to follow, but not so bad...

A little concerning, perhaps, but it might also be the fact that it's just a sketch page that's doing that to you. It's possible that once the backgrounds are in and the whole thing is inked and colored, the position of the "camera" will be clearer. Just in case, though (because I couldn't quite follow your explanation) here's the position of the camera for all the panels:

Spoiler

The way Sonichu and Rosechu are facing in panel 1 will be our 12:00, like on the face of a clock if we were looking upon the scene from a bird's eye view.

1 - 12:00
2 - 10:30
3 - 2:30
4 - 5:00
5 - 3:00
6 - 1:00
7 - 4:00
8 - 9:30
9 - 12:00

Here's the page again for you, since we're on a new page of comments...

Let me know if anything still looks off, even with that information.

Um, but yeah, other than that I like it a lot. Are you gonna make all the comics that Rosechu is in?

I'm either going to depict them or allude to them, yes.

 

[OtterParty]

That last panel. I grinned so hard my face hurts. It hurts so good.

 

[Warden Clawdorf]

Yes.

Just yes.

All of my yes.

TO THE EXTREME!

 

[nyess]

A little concerning, perhaps, but it might also be the fact that it's just a sketch page that's doing that to you. It's possible that once the backgrounds are in and the whole thing is inked and colored, the position of the "camera" will be clearer. Just in case, though (because I couldn't quite follow your explanation) here's the position of the camera for all the panels:

Spoiler

The way Sonichu and Rosechu are facing in panel 1 will be our 12:00, like on the face of a clock if we were looking upon the scene from a bird's eye view.

1 - 12:00
2 - 10:30
3 - 2:30
4 - 5:00
5 - 3:00
6 - 1:00
7 - 4:00
8 - 9:30
9 - 12:00

Here's the page again for you, since we're on a new page of comments...

Let me know if anything still looks off, even with that information.

I'm either going to depict them or allude to them, yes.

Oh, so it's following a clockwise camera shot then? I think I'm starting to get what you're going for. It probably needs the background and stuff to make it clearer. Should be good at that point. Good work!

 

[Trickie]

Oh! While I still remember, I'm going to be doing a small "Introduction to Rosechu's Story" comic for newbies and those who aren't familiar with Christine or Sonichu, and it's going to be in the style that the introduction to the Pokemon games are in ("Are you a boy or a girl?", etc).

What I need is ideas for a title that I should introduce myself as. Ideally, I'd like to avoid just saying I'm the "Pokemon Professor", but I have no idea what to replace it with. An alternate might be "The Recolor Professor", but it's not quite as catchy.

What do you guys think?

 

[nyess]

Oh! While I still remember, I'm going to be doing a small "Introduction to Rosechu's Story" comic for newbies and those who aren't familiar with Christine or Sonichu, and it's going to be in the style that the introduction to the Pokemon games are in ("Are you a boy or a girl?", etc).

What I need is ideas for a title that I should introduce myself as. Ideally, I'd like to avoid just saying I'm the "Pokemon Professor", but I have no idea what to replace it with. An alternate might be "The Recolor Professor", but it's not quite as catchy.

What do you guys think?

Recolor Professor?
Sonichu Professor?
Rosechu Professor?
Professor Bill?
Cherry Coke Professor?

I don't know, whatever seems good.

 

[GREEDY FIREMAN]

I vote for Bill the Scientist.

 

[SteelPlatedHeart]

Competent Sonichu Artist

 

[Saney]

Professor Pot Plant?
Professor Monkey Puzzle?
Professor Devil's Walkingstick?
Professor Boab Prison?
Professor Dragon Blood?
Professor Chapel Oak?

 

[CWCissey]

Professor Snipe.

 

[Nikolai Drozdov]

Prof. Cambiar El Color (Google tells me that that is the spanish translation for recolor).

 

[morganna]

I thought to myself, "There must be a 'Professor Somebody' in the Sonic franchise..." I found a whole list of 'em on a Sonic Wiki.

Guys. Stop the presses. There is a Professor Pickle in Sonic canon.

Professor. Pickle.

 

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"Hiya True Believers! This is (not) Stan Lee, here to tell you about a lone hero called the Recolor Regent! She is a Pokemon Pontificator, a real class act of a Sonichu Scribe and a Rosechu Researcher. This is her story and nothing less, told to you in the Tricky Trickie Tales Way! Excelsior!"

 

[Trickie]

Recolor Professor?
Sonichu Professor?
Rosechu Professor?
Professor Bill?
Cherry Coke Professor?

I don't know, whatever seems good.

I thought about "Sonichu Professor" and "Rosechu Professor" too, but I didn't want to do one without the other. I wish there was just one word that perfectly encapsulated both. "The Electric Hedgehog Pokemon Professor" might work, but it's such a mouthful.

I vote for Bill the Scientist.

As much as I'd love to put Bill into the role, he's got his own role to play in the comic.

Competent Sonichu Artist

I'm flattered, but that's just going to make me sound really conceited. xD

Professor Pot Plant?
Professor Monkey Puzzle?
Professor Devil's Walkingstick?
Professor Boab Prison?
Professor Dragon Blood?
Professor Chapel Oak?

I...what??

Professor Snipe.

Why Snipe, though? Is it a play on "Snape"?

Prof. Cambiar El Color (Google tells me that that is the spanish translation for recolor).

Interesting, but then I'd have to explain the spanish thing and... I don't know. It's just easier to leave it as "Recolor".

I thought to myself, "There must be a 'Professor Somebody' in the Sonic franchise..." I found a whole list of 'em on a Sonic Wiki.

Guys. Stop the presses. There is a Professor Pickle in Sonic canon.

Professor. Pickle.

That's hilarious! How did no one catch this over all these years? He's been canon since 2008.

(I'm not introducing myself as "The Pickle Professor" though, considering the euphemism, I'm really just not that kind of person...)

"Hiya True Believers! This is (not) Stan Lee, here to tell you about a lone hero called the Recolor Regent! She is a Pokemon Pontificator, a real class act of a Sonichu Scribe and a Rosechu Researcher. This is her story and nothing less, told to you in the Tricky Trickie Tales Way! Excelsior!"

While fun, a Stan Lee-like announcer would be a bit weird, especially since I'm supposed to be making it like a Pokemon game intro.

I may just have to go with either "The Recolor Professor" or "The Electric Hedgehog Pokemon Professor".

 

[nyess]

I thought about "Sonichu Professor" and "Rosechu Professor" too, but I didn't want to do one without the other. I wish there was just one word that perfectly encapsulated both. "The Electric Hedgehog Pokemon Professor" might work, but it's such a mouthful.



As much as I'd love to put Bill into the role, he's got his own role to play in the comic.



I'm flattered, but that's just going to make me sound really conceited. xD



I...what??



Why Snipe, though? Is it a play on "Snape"?



Interesting, but then I'd have to explain the spanish thing and... I don't know. It's just easier to leave it as "Recolor".



That's hilarious! How did no one catch this over all these years? He's been canon since 2008.

(I'm not introducing myself as "The Pickle Professor" though, considering the euphemism, I'm really just not that kind of person...)



While fun, a Stan Lee-like announcer would be a bit weird, especially since I'm supposed to be making it like a Pokemon game intro.

I may just have to go with either "The Recolor Professor" or "The Electric Hedgehog Pokemon Professor".

What about the chu professor?

 

[CWCissey]

Why Snipe, though? Is it a play on "Snape"?.

Yes.

 

[Saney]

I...what??

They're all trees. You know, to fit in with the theme of the other Pokemon professors.

 

[Warden Clawdorf]

Professor Poke
Mr. Doc. Prof. Sam

...

That's all I got.

 

[wheat pasta]

Yeah, you could use tree names like Yew (was that taken recently? I haven't played since the first B&W.) or Cypress. Wisteria is also a nice one, or Jasmine or Cherry-Blossom/Cherry Wood (or just Cherry.. but it does sound a bit girly) I'd suggest Professor Maple but we have a Maple on these forums already and it might be confusing. xD Professor Palm maybe, after palm trees? My dad's a landscaper, you'd think I'd know more trees than this..