🎨 Artcow DisneyFan01 / Andrea Avrett - Womanchild whose Husbando is the Treasure Planet version of John Silver; Rewriting Kingdom Hearts with her Self-Insert for Over a Decade

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wateryketchup dijo:
How sad that she's been drawing for like 15 years and has improved so little.
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And in those 15 years, she just recently decided to take criticism after so many people shoved them down her throat constantly. Hell, I was blocked by some of her white knights because I was just giving her honest criticism. How long did it take her to stop tracing as well? She's still a heavy work in progress, but it still baffles me she can do traditional really well.

gummy dijo:
A sketch of the new doctor character has been uploaded.
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I like how her process for designing an outfit for a 19th century sci-fi pirate space doctor was "I just looked up a normal attire that a doctor would wear around a hospital."
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This OC of hers is very bland even for an alien-human hybrid. I think she should show of that OC's alien side, or alternative clothes where she wears outfits from her race.

Honestly, I would like for her to redo the entire storyline so it's less Kingdom Hearts and Disney crap, but that won't happen.
 
FreyaDerp dijo:
Honestly, I would like for her to redo the entire storyline so it's less Kingdom Hearts and Disney crap, but that won't happen.
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She could've easily have just written the story as a Treasure Planet fanfic during one of her overhauls, but she's so obsessed with the idea of being best friends with every Disney character that she insists on keeping a format that only works for an interactive game. Her story is just so tedious, I don't see how anyone other than her enjoys reading it
 
FreyaDerp dijo:
Unfortunately she has a following that does like her story.

But it would make more sense to make it revolve around Treasure Planet than the mess she created, but we all know she won't change her story.
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okay hear my mega-autistic ass out

she could still have it revolve around treasure planet and have donald and goofy and all that if she were to just make it a kh fic (even tho we know she won't but still).

treasure planet could have been a world trying to fight back the Heartless, and SDG were 1. trying to restore the light and 2. searching for Riku in the Etherium (i think). Marina could still keep her relationship with Silver and they could do a Meg/Hercules thing where Jim got kidnapped by (insert villain) and SDG + Marina and Silver gotta save him. Then it could also have the twist that Silver's a Heartless and they could restore him with light and love yada yada (also the doctor character could be a summon and silver/marina swap out as guest members)

the fic would be way shorter and honestly kinda cool to read. translating a video game into a story without just telling cutscenes is hard but if she really tried she might be able to do it. and she gets to keep everything, disney characters, silver/marina, the doctor, silver being evil, marina being important, etc etc. she'd just have to admit it was a kh fic

sorry i'm undercaffeinated, a huge kh fan, and super fucking tired and i get rambly as hell like this

also happy late new year guys
 
How much splurging is she going to do when the third KH game is released? Assuming she played the other games but likely not.

I just expect her to add more broken plots to her already broken story.
 
friedshrimp dijo:
She has admitted she only wants to add to the fic the Disney elements and ignore all the time-travel/clones/Nomura crap. Good for her for keeping the story "simple", but the fic's still too long and boring for anyone to handle.
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yeah i can see why she wouldn't want that.

it would be possible to just shorten it to "hey we're looking for my friend and ur friend got kidnapped so lets go find them yay" but then she couldn't add more disney characters than christ himself

hell she'd still find a way to make it drag on
 
That character somehow manages to look both really bland and very derivative of the character off Farscape with head tentacle dreadlock things.
The portraits of the actors I can't really criticise though. The one of Picard is very nice. I think she should stick with drawing stuff like this and hilarious and awkward manbearpig porn comics instead of writing her godawful neverending magnum opus.
 
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