Its pretty great honestly. Only issue is that Vi being in prison makes pretty much zero sense and Caitlyn just releasing her without much pushback is genuinely retarded. I like that she is a fucking thug when she comes out though because that is exactly what doing a nickel in prison would do to her.
I would have just had her join the enforcers begrudgingly as she would have no other place to go as the corrupt warden could have lied and told her that she is marked for death down there while he lied to Silco that she is dead. Helps build up the corrupt warden a bit more while reinforcing the general theme of dad/daughter relationships and how family drives characters to do stupid noble things. It also gives the corrupt enforcer some much needed screen time.
It sets up that Vi is already friends with Caitlyn through that. Then she could be set up (Jinx's with the hextech heist) and sent to prison. While in prison she realizes that Jinx is alive through the heist, learns from an inmate that she isn't marked for death and using the element of surprise decides to hunt down Silco. This makes it more believable when Caitlyn breaks her out and she is jaded as fuck about the enforcers again. She also gives a shit about Silco in this version from the get go, was really strange that she didn't seem to care that much about Silco and only focused on getting Jinx back.
Just a slight change, but it makes the narrative flow far better in my opinion.
I would have just had her join the enforcers begrudgingly as she would have no other place to go as the corrupt warden could have lied and told her that she is marked for death down there while he lied to Silco that she is dead. Helps build up the corrupt warden a bit more while reinforcing the general theme of dad/daughter relationships and how family drives characters to do stupid noble things. It also gives the corrupt enforcer some much needed screen time.
It sets up that Vi is already friends with Caitlyn through that. Then she could be set up (Jinx's with the hextech heist) and sent to prison. While in prison she realizes that Jinx is alive through the heist, learns from an inmate that she isn't marked for death and using the element of surprise decides to hunt down Silco. This makes it more believable when Caitlyn breaks her out and she is jaded as fuck about the enforcers again. She also gives a shit about Silco in this version from the get go, was really strange that she didn't seem to care that much about Silco and only focused on getting Jinx back.
Just a slight change, but it makes the narrative flow far better in my opinion.